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by The Letter J on March 25, 2010 at 12:00 am

Three fun facts about Captain Belmont:

1. He still has part of his right arm.

2. He has another arm for use in combat.

3. Only the Chancellor and his men know what really happened to his arm.

└ Tags: Belmont, Book One, Chancellor Northman

http://shawntionary.com/clockworks/ Shawn

I like the way this story is developing.

One pro tip: In panel 1, the first word bubbles should have a connector to Mr Whitewig’s later bubbles, instead of the arrow that sort of points to his elbow. Something like what’s in panel 2:

http://shawntionary.com/clockworks/?p=1069

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The Letter J Reply:
March 25th, 2010 at 5:34 am
New version up. Hope it reads better now.

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http://gedece-en.blogspot.com Gedece

I also like it, now we know they are protecting themselves from “the afflicted”. I guess we’ll find out later on what kind of affliction we are talking about. Althought we already have some clues, they are still weak. What we do know is that it is something internal, as the sniper didn’t see the man was free of the affliction, even with his steampunk target magnifier.

There are some nice clues, if non afflicted have arrived earlier, there could be people resistant to the affliction or entire towns/groups free of it (which sould mean they isolated themselves or they have some sort of cure).

BTW, I really really loved the little trivia about Belmont’s arm. It’s funny, if he has another one for combat, he has a normal arm and an armed arm.

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The Letter J Reply:
March 25th, 2010 at 6:15 am
Glad you enjoyed the “fun facts”. We’ll try to do more things like that in the future.

Unfortunately, I can’t seem to comment on anything else – I keep falling into spoiler territory every time I try lol.

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Gedece Reply:
March 25th, 2010 at 9:50 pm
That’a why I keep trying to figure some things out myself and comment them here, because you can’t, and what I say it’s not cannon, then I could be spoiling without knowing and without anyone being the wiser.

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http://www.tuxandbunny.com Shadowydreamer

I just found you – the art is beautiful, the story intriguing.. *bookmark*

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The Letter J Reply:
March 25th, 2010 at 5:14 pm
Awesome! Thank you – we hope you enjoy what we’ve got coming!

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http://www.planescapemetamorphosis.com Micah

Aha, now the beginning of the story is explained a bit. I was curious who the man was and what happened.

Is Belmont’s metal arm functional, then? Or is it worn just for decoration?

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The Letter J Reply:
March 25th, 2010 at 5:36 pm
It’s functional, but it’s also very new – he is still getting accustomed to it, hence the awkwardness and lack of use.

Also, thanks again for the mentions over at Planescape: Metamorphosis!

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Ramsus

Ah, so they don’t just shoot people because they’re xenophobic, good to know.

I can’t wait to see the combat arm. I really want to see if it is a arm with weapons on it or just an arm more suited to using weapons (perhaps weapons too heavy for normal people to hold). Then again, even if it doesn’t do anything special besides actually be usable as an arm in combat that’s pretty impressive and I won’t begrudge him having multiple arms for different situations. I would too. I hope eventually we too will know what happened to his arm.

I feel sorry for the gypsy caravan. Those guys always end up dead in fictional settings for some reason or another.

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dredogastus f

{Wanders in from the direction of Clorencia} Hail the city! Can you aid a desperate travel-* BANG.

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moxicity

HMMM. The story seems very interesting, but unfortunately your men look like women. It bothers me a little. Hmmm. They definitely have more delicate features than most men have. There are many subtle and less subtle differences between male and female faces, and a beard or goatee doesn’t make a feminine face more masculine.

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http://katya-s69.livejournal.com/ Katy

Oooh … mysteeeeeeerrious!!!! Lovin’ it!

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Rand

Fear the hostile gypsies

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