Yeah, Yvette was a Captain in the BDL. This is something we kinda/sorta hinted at waaaaaay back in Chapter 1, on Page 16, Panel 7.
This page proved to be a challenge for me. The dialogue that appears in this final version is very different from the script which had a more confrontational tone throughout. I’m still flip flopping on whether I made the right call to change it. I’m going to leave it as-is for now, but I may go back and change it later.
Ne’er-Do-Wells return from hiatus this week has suffered from the same sort of indecisiveness and has been bumped from Weds. to Friday this week so I could work a few things out.
I guess it’s just been kind of a hectic week and clarity of mind hasn’t been easy to come by. I’ll try to get my act together for next week when we check in on Captain Pardy and see where she ran off to a few pages back.
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